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the fame and glory of a magnificent warrior being ped on to, or rather, stolen by his victor simply because the victor has succeeded in killing the well-famed soldier that possessed magnificence, many achievements, and remarkable strength. His successes are robbed in such a way that the death of this magnificent warrior would raise his victor to fame because he has achieved greatness in defeating a great warrior that achieved so much.